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Woah, a suicidal limerick. Cool.
*gasps*
you have a gift. No, seriously.
this is unreal
There's something about this poem...
Aha! Yes! It reminds of this other poem I read. I wish I could recall the title or the author. But it was slightly longer than this poem, around the same subject, and it was very meaningful. As well as ths peom.
Even though it's strangely simplistic, it's still a poem. And what's more is it's actually good. A good poem doesn't need to be 50 lines long to get past an idea that could be summarized into 5. Your poem got the point across quickly, simply, and effectively. I can't find a thing wrong with it. I can also relate to the poem. When I'm not watching the clock and wishing I had someone to spend my time with, time does seem to go on forever. Let that be a lesson to ya'll, keep one eye on the clock and one eye on what you're doing.
Peace!
V
I don't know what to think about it. Just a thought more than even a poem...hmmm. Something to meditate on. I like it as that. And it isn't the sort of thing where any comments or advice are really needed, is it? Well done, ya crazy republican asshole.
Love,
Dragonman