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Well, I think the lines were too short, if you ask me. Perhaps you should consider bringing some of the together? This way, it won't sound so chopped up like ...

I think I loved this poem so much because after reading the first stanza, I was reminded of something that went on in my life a couple of years ago ...

Hm...I don't think this was one long poem. Looked like eight or nine to me. Just like you did last time, with the eleven. Why can't you just post ONE ...

the hideous battle going on below is you. I think "is you" should probably be at the bottom of the previous stanza. Also, the one thing this poem lacked were ...

But rather see the scars, For they're stained with my life. In my opinion, you should take out the "But." It isn't really needed. Also, stained with my life? Hm, ...

I think what got me the most was the starting of each line. Each line seemed to go into another topic. However, I know how you feel about writing something ...

Hm, two word lines. I don't do this often, and I would suggest to do this either, sometimes when over used, the poem seems sliced into pieces, and not really ...

I agree with Firestarter, it was confusing. A high wind frizzled the silent woods, a gentle rush at the tall swaying branches. The sky was pale blue overhead, cloudless and ...

why does everyone seem to have an animal avator except for me? hm, who knows. anyway, at first, i didn't really understand the poem until the end of the first ...

I remain to be the hostage of your past. Should probably just be: I remain the hostage of your past. The "to be" makes it to lengthy and breaks up ...

The concept--the message of this poem was very powerful. However, when I looked at it, I saw it as being viewed from both figurative and literal perspectives which I really ...

Questions need answering answers need questioning. Very powerful...:considers plagiarism:,lol--jk. Anyway, this poem didn't flow very well in some parts. For instance, I need a white knight on a horse

Only $$ 249.99 $$!!! (After mail-in rebate) Tis the only part I really liked. :( The rest was interesting --it certainly kept me reading...but I'm just not so sure if ...

God only knows I need you, This began very beautifully. Please turn on your phone, Read my texts of denial, I liked this part too, but I had to read ...

Keep telling yourself I'm nobody I'm nothing I'm worthless. This part was the most meaningful piece of the poem in my opinion. I guess because I can easily relate to ...