Cheetah

Hi Silverlock! Cheetah here to review for you today! Oh. My. Gosh. I love this. Please, please don't ever abandon this story. You really have something here and you've treated ...

Hello! Cheetah here to review your chapter! What I liked: I liked your dialogue. It was very intriguing and you have an excellent way of transitioning smoothly from one person's ...

Hi Alex! Cheetah here to review for you! Wow! I really enjoyed reading this. Water is really like that, I've realized. It can save you, kill you, help you, destroy ...

Hi there, Cheetah here to review! This was interesting. I liked your use of language and your dialogue was very clear. However, I found the ending somewhat confusing. So, everything ...

Hi, Cheetah here to review your piece. As FireFox said, there's definitely a lot of emotion in this. What I don't get, however, is what point you're trying to make. ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review your piece! What I liked: 1) I liked the rhyming! A lot of rhyming poetry just doesn't seem to work, it tends to sound awkward, ...

Hi, Cheetah again, here to review your piece! This was intriguing. I'm definitely interested to know what comes next. Like since this character is dead, who will be the new ...

Hi, Cheetah here to review! Your first piece you say? Well, I applaud you- it was very good!! You got me hooked on the first sentence, and I never, ever ...

Hi, Cheetah here again to review your piece! I love your writing, you're really gifted! You got me interested from the beginning and I stayed interested until the end. I ...

Hi! Cheetah here for a review on your story! I really enjoyed reading this! As VeniVidiVici said the repetition really helps the story flow forward. I especially liked the end. ...

Hi Mary, Cheetah here to review your piece. This was really good! There were no spelling errors and the writing was very clear. You got my interested in the story ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review your piece. I really, really liked this. You put so much emotion into it, I could feel it. The sadness, helplessness, all of it. I ...

Hi, Cheetah here to review your story! Wow. Just wow. This may be the best short story I've ever seen on this site. Beautifully written, wonderful flow, vocabulary. Everything. I ...

Hi, Cheetah here to review your piece! I like your style of writing. You kept me hooked and this was very clear and easy to read. There's not really anything ...

Hi, Cheetah again to review chapter 4. I really liked this chapter! You definitely breathed life into Asenath's situation. I loved the whole setup and everything was perfectly paced. This ...