Charm

Hey! I really, really loved this! The first two lines were phenomenal! I related a lot to it, even though I've never dated before. I feel like this can also ...

Hey! I can definitely tell that your poetry has improved and is getting even better than it was before. I can't really tell if you are trying to rhyme this ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this poem so I thought I'd give a review! I really hope this is helpful :) Story: You (the reader, I'm guessing) is sitting by a ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this poem and I'd thought I'd give it a review. Hope I'm helpful! :D Story: I think this poem is about someone who is hurting and ...

I was going to review this but ugggghhh. It's soooooo goooooooooood and relatable. If you ever need someone to talk to Ever you know I'm always here read to listen

Hey! I'm here to review your lovely poem, so let's get into this: "once you do bed," This doesn't make sense and it confused me. I don't know what you ...

Hey! I'm here to review your wonderful poem! I really loved this poem and how it flows so well. I feel like the ending could have been stronger. Also you ...

Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . YAY FOURTH CHAPTER! Plot, Pace and Point of View I'm really confused. I thought Lola didn't tell ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem! "There was no after story for us, Because our story was never meant to be." I love the beginning to this poem! "I ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem! I've noticed that you are having a problem with spaces. You either are missing one or having one where you don't need one. ...

Hey! I'm here to review this! "With the clamor of metal, their violently swords clashed between them." That sounds a little weird. Try rewording it. "He dashed forward and their ...

Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . I HAVE RETURNED! Plot, Pace and Point of View Oh. Anxiety. I have it too and I ...

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Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . (you already know this ^u^) I've decided to start following one of your stories. Plot, Pace and ...

Hey! I'm here to review this lovely poem! I thought that this poem was beautifully written. I think these rhymes could be better since those words are so similar: "A ...