Hi there sayantan4119! Niteowl here to review this.
Overall, I feel like this piece is trying to hit us over the head with its message: don't insult others who you perceive as fools. That's not necessarily a bad thing...after all, plenty of stories and poems have a moral message to them.
However, I feel like the piece is just telling us this, and aside from some rhyme here and there, doesn't feel very poetic at all. Personally, if I was writing something with a message, I'd try to make a story out of it. Maybe I'd make characters to represent the smart man, the fool, and the insulter. Or maybe I'd use metaphors and similes to make the wording more interesting. Probably a mix of both.
Speaking of word choice, I would consider not using the word "fool" so much. Repetition can be a poetic device, but here it becomes overbearing.
Lastly, I agree with previous reviewers that you have some weird spacing. Generally, you shouldn't have a space between the word and the punctuation mark.
Overall, this is a good message, but I think it could be expressed in a more creative and poetic way if you worked on it. Keep writing!
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