Charm

Hey! Sorry for the short review! I really liked this poem. I thought it was really poetic and beautiful. I think if you add better punctuation and grammar to it ...

Hey! I'm here to review your work as you requested. So let's get into the review :P First Impressions: Before I read a work I always scroll down to see ...

Hey! I really loved this poem. I related to it a lot. I'm sort of going through something like that as well. You can see it in my poetry and ...

Hey! I'm here to review your prologue! Immediately I was happy with the length. I prefer shorter chapters and prologues just because it's easier to pause and come back and ...

Hi! Just a short review for this peom :D "Have you been crying, For all night?" 'for all night' sounds awkward and the comma is unnecessary. "So. see if the ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem as requested. So let's get into the review! First Impressions: I think Chapter 21 was much better than this one but that's just ...

Hey! I'm here to review your prologue as you requested! So let's get into the review :) First Impression: This was brilliant! I loved the dialogue, it was so realistic ...

Hey! I'm here to review your prologue as you requested! So let's get into the review :) First Impression: You still have a couple issues with show not tell but ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem, as you requested! First Thoughts: At first I was really confused but I sort of understood by like the last couple of stanzas. ...

Hey! Here to review your first chapter as you have requested :) First Thoughts: The first I realized when reading your chapter was the you were telling me and not ...

Hey! Here's my thoughts on this poem. I thought this idea was very interesting and sort of deep. I think adding some better punctuation would help the flow of the ...

Hey! Just a short review for a short work~ I was very confused when reading this. Not only was your grammar and punctuation a little messed up but also the ...

Hey! A short review. Sorry that it's so short by the way: I think adding better punctuation could really improve this poem. Also if you make: "The reverence and passion ...

Hey! I actually really liked this poem. I love short poems because they are awesome and hard to write. The rhyme didn't feel forced at all it seemed totally natural. ...

Hey! I really liked this poem. The story was great and it's very relate-able. I feel like you could improve the poem by explaining what happening behind the picture. You ...