Her husband had a no color on face policy ,it came to her mind to change it,
that very morning her lips wore a Flaming Red!
Hey! Just a short review for a short work~I was very confused when reading this. Not only was your grammar and punctuation a little messed up but also the face you wrote it, the words, made it confusing. The story was hard to understand what was happening.I've never heard of micro fiction before. I didn't even know it was a thing xD isn't this just a short story? Anyway I think if you rewrite this with clearer words and more words it would be more understandable.Sorry that this was so negative,Alice ♥
Hey there urvikavyas. It's just lizzy dropping by real quick, so without a further ado, let the reviewing begin.Welcome to YWS! Congrats on publishing what I am guessing is your second or third piece. Well the second in your series of micro-fiction. And that brings me to my first point.
Its Micro-Fiction again!
Her husband had a no color on face policy ,
Her husband had a no-color-on-face policy,
that very morning her lips wore a#FF0000 ">flaming red!
I think it would make sense if you said "no-color-on-face" policy
I don't really get it. Some woman's husband doesn't want her to wear makeup, but she decided to anyways. What's the story written for? Is it written to convey symbolism, or action, or drama, or what?
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