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  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: 112

    Wow. I found this poem touching, scary and funny all at once. It is actually quite relatable, as I think lots of people have these feelings where they're just so ...

    Jun 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Ugly.

    Heya, the title was what attracted me to this poem, so good choice of a title first of all. It's nice and short, and gives the reader a nice idea ...

    Jun 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Review Re: To my Ex best friend

    Heya, was just going through the poems and I felt like reading this one. The style, I find, is unique, but matches the subject matter well. It feels like it's ...

    Jun 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: red marks

    Hello, Okay so I have never self-harmed before but I had a friend who did it, and even though I've not experienced it myself, this poem touched me a lot. ...

    Jan 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Feeling

    Hey, This piece was easy to read which I liked, but it also was complex and carried a lot of meaning. It was very interesting, and I particularly enjoyed the ...

    Jan 8, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: sun-drenched

    Hi there, Firstly, I like your title a lot. I don't often associate the sun with the word 'drenched', so it made me interested. I liked the imagery in this ...

    Jan 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: You Chose Her

    Hello! I feel like this poem is heartfelt, particularly in the last one, which I always like. Your title is effective when it comes to drawing people in, and you ...

    Nov 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: my heart is torn

    Hi, nice poem! I was instantly drawn in by the title as it sounded very appealing. You got the emotions across very well, and it was very heartfelt, and I ...

    Nov 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: seven reasons

    Hello! I was looking through the poetry list and the title of this drew me in; it sounded so interesting. I feel like it's quite an abstract poem, and I ...

    Nov 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: for lilly

    Heya! This is one of my favourite poems I have read on this website, actually, ever. The thing that makes it so wonderful is the beautiful sense of love you ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I lost someone I never belonged to in the first place

    Heya! First of all, the title is very evocative and instantly made me want to read what you had to say. I didn't expect such a short poem, but it ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: love is beautiful like the setting sun

    First of all, the title is beautiful. It was very evocative, and made me want to read straight away. I think it's a very honest poem, and looks at love ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: My Lonely Night

    Heya, came to review this piece of work because the title had me interested (good work choosing it). I think your first four lines worked really well. They made me ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Lady Lilith

    Hello! I really like this poem. The imagery is so beautiful, but also really describes the meaning of the painting well. I love how you describe the confusion in the ...

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: When the Night Lost the Moon

    Hello! Firstly, you have titled this very well. It's an evocative title, and managed to draw me in successfully. I like how you have a question as your first line, ...

    Aug 30, 2016


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