Chanson

This was a little simple, a little bit too verging-on-a-ramble for my tastes. I think a little more imagery would have gone a long way in this piece. That isn't ...

i really loved the first two verses, they were so good they made the rest of the poem rather insignificant. the second to last verse was a little muddled, a ...

yeah, i liked it. i loved the characterization. i was so sad for the girl, though, but that is only because i am a crazy feminist. or so my algebra ...

this had some wonderful lines, some great images. for somewhat, i relate to it. the verse: But I feel that my spell is fading, and you fall captive to the ...

i feel exactly like that right now. i probably woudln't have liked this poem so much if it didn't describe so exactly how i feel. the good thing about poetry ...

i think most people will think this is wonderful. for me, it was far too ornate. over decorated to the point of making it almost tacky. i felt a kind ...

this was very beautiful. i'm sure you know that because you wrote it and if you write something liek this, you have to know. the images were gorgeous. i could ...

i got it (i hope!). very smart, you make me jealous. the actual POEM didn't blow me away, although it was good. a little simple, a little bare. maybe it ...

i like. it sums up my sundays entirely. that act of doing nothing and the feeling that it's ok. the first verse i wasn't in love with the poem, i ...

i loved this. it was an interesting subject. it reminded me of movie-type love but you made it realistic. i used to write stories like this, before i decided to ...

too simple. too easy to write. not enough...poetry. more like a random stream of thought, which can be very pretty and interesting. but this...wasn't so much. i mean, i know ...

you know i guess i was confused by this. i didn't get a feel for who the He was or for who the narrator was. but i liked it, mainly ...

hmmm, i'm not sure about this. i really enjoy prose but this didn't seem like prose. or poetry. it seemed unsure and shakey. i have experienced severe anxiety before and ...

it's almost too simple. i can't quite put my finger on it but there is something missing. maybe just the language is too blah. make the languge a little more ...

Cliche, obviously. I liked the title and the first line. The title was short, yet seemed to hold contempt. The first line was sort of cool, it was original which ...