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Hi, Aura ^-^ Firstly, you have a beautiful handle on description beautiful lovely setting, and readers can easily be pulled into your world. This was a nice piece, very well ...

Hi, Sparrow ^-^ At first I was a bit confused about what was going on, and I'd suggest maybe smoothing out the beginning part a bit. The opening of a ...

Hi, sbear ^-^ Firstly let me say--wow! The story's description is what strung me in. I lovvve stuff like this xD Awesome writing technique. It's clear that you have a ...

Hi, DannieInkBlotHanson ^-^ Firstly, I loved the opening! It really inspired me to think outside the box when opening my open stories c: Anyhoo, this piece is not forced. It ...

Hi, Holysocks ^-^ Firstly, I adore your name choices c: You have a nice, personal style, very unique and different. I would suggest you put a bit more into the ...

Hiya, EnchantedPanda ^-^ Firstly, I LOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVE your username >.< so adorable lol I started following you because it's so cute haha anyhoo :p excuse my weirdn

Hi again, Peg :P Random note: Your chapter (that I just reviewed) was awesome, and I'd like to read more any day of the week lol Anyhoo, as far as ...

Hiya, Peg ^-^ Firstly let me note that I lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvve stories like this >.< Anyhoo, I liked the character names more than anything, especially Flint lol The setting was sensational, ...

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyy goshhhh This is, by far and foremost, the most gorgeous piece I've read on here BY FAR. Simply amazing! I adored this with every fiber of my being. ...

Hi, Aouther2b ^-^ Firstly, this is really nice c: It rhymed nicely at first: "Black and Blue Swollen too" but then the line: Tearful eyes..."mean nothing to you." The last ...

Hi, SpartsOfDoubt ^-^ Your writing style and word choice is probably the exact opposite from my own lol So it's interesting to read :p As far as the piece goes, ...

Haha this was sooooo adorable! ^-^ Fun to read, entertaining, super duper cute, and very interesting >.< I honestly can't give any advice on how to "improve" it lol but ...

Hiya, Winterbites ^-^ Since you're like, my only friend here, I thought I'd check out some of your work lol Knowing you aside: this was actually extremely entertaining lol A ...

Hi ^-^ Firstly, I thought it was a really nice piece of work, and clearly a lot of effort was placed into it ^-^ I was a tinny tiny bit ...

Hi ^-^ The emotional concept is hellishly relatable for those of us who have dealt with thoughts of suicide and/or participated in self-harm to release the tension of hurt, angry ...