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Re: Dear You
Hands down the most beautiful short story/letter I have ever read. I loved the way you used your words and bent them under your will. You are raw, you are ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: My Helen
I love this, it's different, new and original. I love how you allowed your readers to see the accent given by the main character in the poem. Just the lines... ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: That night of sepulchral ablution
I love the flowing stanzas and how they all told their own story. If I could see this as a painting, I would imagine sharp and contrasting colors that are ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: I want to be a Christian
I am a Christian myself, and a college student. So, the struggle is all too real to me. I sin, I mess up and screw up what being a Christian ...
Jan 20, 2018 -
Re: It Was The Color Of Your Hair
In every friendship, something like this happens. You see your friend as someone who can't be broken and you lean on them so much that it starts to hurt them ...
Jan 20, 2018 -
Re: I drank the potion
The idea, creativity and originality portrayed in this poem is eccentric and alarmingly beautiful. The word choices were precise and sent chills down my spine. I loved it. The last ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: A Cup Of Coffee
Hey! Cate here for a review. Yours is the first one I've done in a while. Here it goes! I first would like to say that the names used are ...
Nov 25, 2017 -
Re: The End
Hello there, CateRose here for a review. Only several things that I want to point out, very easy fixes. - " no biggie." It may fit the Character's personality, but ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: Worse Than Legally Blind
Oh my lord. This was so good. I loved how you used the sense of sight in this. I am a few steps away from legally blind myself (from reading ...
Apr 14, 2017 -
Re: The Secret of the Costume Room
Whoaaaa. This was something I have most certainly never seen before in my life. I loved it! It was sooooo original. How the heck did you come up with this? ...
Apr 14, 2017 -
Re: we could light our fingers like matches, set our heads on fire.
Though she be small yet she be fierce :).. this is a gorgeous poem. And I read through some f the reviews and saw the longer one and I have ...
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: What Death Looks Like
This was a great read. And definitely not like other poems. Most poets use poetry to convey deep thoughts and still deeper philosophical thoughts or emotions. But you used to ...
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: An Hour Past Heathrow
Awwww. I really loved this. The way it flowed made me relaxed and comfortable, which is a very nice thing- even made me smile a few times. The one tiny ...
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: Someone Else Who Can Fly
ummmmm.... whoaaaaa. Dude, like really, this blew my mind. Beautifully done, expertly chosen words. This is a story in in poem form and I love poetry like that. The main ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 6, A Risky Guest
Hey, and Happy Review Day! Your writing style is very sophisticated. Almost like the writing technique you'd find in a book by C.S. Lewis. The relationship between the two main ...
Mar 26, 2017
