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CateRose17

  • Other » Romantic, Fanfiction Re: Dear You

    Hands down the most beautiful short story/letter I have ever read. I loved the way you used your words and bent them under your will. You are raw, you are ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: My Helen

    I love this, it's different, new and original. I love how you allowed your readers to see the accent given by the main character in the poem. Just the lines... ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Humor Re: That night of sepulchral ablution

    I love the flowing stanzas and how they all told their own story. If I could see this as a painting, I would imagine sharp and contrasting colors that are ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: ​I want to be a Christian

    I am a Christian myself, and a college student. So, the struggle is all too real to me. I sin, I mess up and screw up what being a Christian ...

    Jan 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: It Was The Color Of Your Hair

    In every friendship, something like this happens. You see your friend as someone who can't be broken and you lean on them so much that it starts to hurt them ...

    Jan 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: I drank the potion

    The idea, creativity and originality portrayed in this poem is eccentric and alarmingly beautiful. The word choices were precise and sent chills down my spine. I loved it. The last ...

    Jan 16, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Cup Of Coffee

    Hey! Cate here for a review. Yours is the first one I've done in a while. Here it goes! I first would like to say that the names used are ...

    Nov 25, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The End

    Hello there, CateRose here for a review. Only several things that I want to point out, very easy fixes. - " no biggie." It may fit the Character's personality, but ...

    Sep 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Worse Than Legally Blind

    Oh my lord. This was so good. I loved how you used the sense of sight in this. I am a few steps away from legally blind myself (from reading ...

    Apr 14, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: The Secret of the Costume Room

    Whoaaaa. This was something I have most certainly never seen before in my life. I loved it! It was sooooo original. How the heck did you come up with this? ...

    Apr 14, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: we could light our fingers like matches, set our heads on fire.

    Though she be small yet she be fierce :).. this is a gorgeous poem. And I read through some f the reviews and saw the longer one and I have ...

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What Death Looks Like

    This was a great read. And definitely not like other poems. Most poets use poetry to convey deep thoughts and still deeper philosophical thoughts or emotions. But you used to ...

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: An Hour Past Heathrow

    Awwww. I really loved this. The way it flowed made me relaxed and comfortable, which is a very nice thing- even made me smile a few times. The one tiny ...

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Someone Else Who Can Fly

    ummmmm.... whoaaaaa. Dude, like really, this blew my mind. Beautifully done, expertly chosen words. This is a story in in poem form and I love poetry like that. The main ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 6, A Risky Guest

    Hey, and Happy Review Day! Your writing style is very sophisticated. Almost like the writing technique you'd find in a book by C.S. Lewis. The relationship between the two main ...

    Mar 26, 2017


What orators lack in depth they make up for in length.
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