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Re: #MyWonderfulGirlfriend
Hello there, HerBugaboo, This is so very sweet and romantic. I loved it. The subject of such words is one lucky girl. If I was you, I would have posted ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: Don't Speak
Hello there tallsunflower, This is very good. I love the idea. This is so true in life a lot of the time. I won't be too picky, since I'm in ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: Delete
Heyyy, BloodinkSeesFootage, I loved this. It hit so close to home and was so perfect and true. I feel like it was written directly for me. This is something that ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: The First
Hello there, Verser, -claps- very very nice. That was a take that on things that I had never thought about before. I loved this poem. Your poem sparked some very ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Hollow
Hello there, timmyjake, I loved this poem! As worried as you were that it was improperly done, I couldn't find a problem with it. Actually, I could barely find enough ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Inspire Me
hello there, WindSailor, time for another review. woohoo! a poem about an inability to write poems! how genius! this was really really nice to read. I loved this work. It ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: Masks.
hello there, RachelLeeAnn This is an amazing piece of work!!! It really is !!!! This is exactly how I always feel. The masked man wants to take over my life, ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: My Last Wish
hello there,vluvswriting, wow......... that's all I could say at first...wow. This is outstanding. It is absolutely, amazingly, marvelous. There was one capitalization note, always capitalizing the wo
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: Never
Hello there, Tsholdin, This is very short and I don't do very well with short reviews, but I will try haha. This is piece is short like I said but ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: you
hey there, smile, This poem really hit close to home, as i had a pretty nasty break up yesterday but i still loved the piece. This poem is extremely well ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Wrists
hello there, ConverseFireGirl, First off, i'll tell you I am a cutter so I hope not to sound too critical or anything.......but honestly I really enjoyed reading this. It is ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Forever light
heylo there, EsMsND, You said that this is your first poem so i'll be lenient, haha. But I really have to say, it does not flow well at all. It ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Feeling
hey there, conversefiregirl, I like this poem a lot. You really emphasized every emotion well and had amazing description with very few words. My favorite two are "It sticks in ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: Rich As S***
Hey there, BloodInkSeesFootage, wow, I seem to review a lot of your work, haha. That's what friends are for? I think we have that much in common. Anyway if i'm ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Surefire Violation
hey there, Bloodinkseesfootage! This is wonderful! I haven't seen many acrostic poems around youngwriterssociety, and I really stink at writing them, but you nailed it! I love the topic, a ...
Jan 9, 2014
