Cadi

Ooh. That first section really hit me with the nostalgia. And the fourth absolutely pins down a moment for me - a long, sustained memory kind of moment. I'm afraid ...

Hi there, EKK15! And welcome to YWS - I see you're relatively new. Hope you're enjoying it here so far! So, the first stanza of this poem really caught me. ...

Hey Stella! So, I really liked this. The first half of it, just describing the journey through the desert, and the stars, and the emptiness, really captures a mood and ...

Hi there, Onlyhuman, and welcome to YWS! I hope you're liking it here so far! This piece really digs into one of those spots of insecurity that so many people ...

Hi Nerrvany, and welcome to YWS! I hope you're liking it here so far :) I see you're really playing with the "rules" of poetry with this work, and that's ...

Heyhi, RLShaw. I see this is the first work you've posted, so welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here! I think you've gone for an interesting topic with ...

Hi pixelstick! This is a promising snippet - it opens up lots of questions about the characters and setting. Because this is only a short sketch of an idea, I ...

Hey there, Kevybears! I can see this is going to go terribly wrong already - the idea of an evil baby hyena is a little worrying. I'd be interested to ...

Hey methrirr! Okay, before I start, couple of disclaimers. One: there's potential for confusion in the fact that you've posted it on behalf of (I assume) another YWSer. I'm going ...

Hey there, zeph! Glad to see you got something out of the Flash Fiction event - it's nice that it was a lot of fun, and also helped you turn ...

Hey there, vewrites! Well, this is an exciting start! A terrifying an unexplained earthquake (or something similar) is definitely a hook, so I can easily see readers being keen to ...

Hey there, Dakota! Before I start, I'd like to say that you've got an interesting start here - I do wonder what's going on with this mysterious Eclipse, and how ...

Hey there, Clarity! I'll start with the disclaimer: I don't spend a lot of time around the poetry section. That said, I'm happy to give a shot at reviewing anything, ...

Hey there, pinkrose! I've never read anything from a tree's point of view before, so this was new and cool. It's a really interesting idea to try and work out ...

Hey there, er334, I know it's been quite a while since you posted this, but it looks very lonely with no reviews, so I figured I should give it some ...