Hey there!
I really enjoyed reading this short. I would like to say, when I read "in her once, cold brown eyes", I couldn't help but to ask myself, did she change because the girl wanted to leave, or did she realize it was time to let go and became light-hearted about the decision?
Personally, I feel that this could be a story about a mother and a daughter, the daughter being desperate to finally go out into the world alone. Good work!
Points: 36
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