Hi! This is my first review as I am new to YWS, so anyone feel free to tell me if I am doing something wrong!
I feel that this poem is really descriptive of the topic you chose, and it was a very interesting topic. I enjoy how you began with the volcanic eruption, and then ended with how regretful the people were that they had gotten caught up in this natural disaster. Another interesting point in this poem is how you compared the volcano to a monster, and how it had lost it's temper causing the eruption.
Very intriguing poem, and I feel that you did a great job.
Points: 126
Reviews: 5
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