Butterfinger

Hey there! I was really looking to review this piece, but I couldn't get past all the foul language. The 'f' word turns me off totally. I'd suggest putting that ...

Hi-ya! For me, this piece was so interesting to read because it's set in a different time. I couldn't stop reading it because you played out the characters just enough ...

Hi-ya! This really brought out a new light onto a sunset for me, brilliant writing! My favorite part: And as I watched that sun go down, the world was mine ...

Hi-ya! You always come with something interesting! I like it! Great imagery! I understand the story line, but there was more raw hurt than emotion. I don't know how you'd ...

This is definitely a different poem. To me, it's more like prose. It doesn't read like poetry to me. Good job!

Wow, crazy imagery skills you have. Great work!

Love it! It flows nicely, and it's entertaining! I do most my homework too! Hahaha! Keep writing!

I love this! Full of emotion that carries through to the end. Sad ending, but beautiful! Love it! Keep writing!

I love this! Full of emotion that carries through to the end. Sad ending, but beautiful! Love it! Keep writing!

Wow! You've painted an eerie scene that caught my attention right from the start! My only comment is you spelled sil e nce wrong. e not a. Great work! Keep ...

Hi-ya! Here's my comments!: For the Being aware, Nightfall brings about a native truth. Interesting to think about! Dawn shines a blinding light upon the mundane circus of normality, Love ...

I never would have thought so much could be written about a coat. Brilliant!

Hey ScratchMan! Thanks for the review! From my perspective, a bridge would be quicker than I knife, or maybe the character doesn't fancy stabbing them self as much as jumping ...

Thanks for all your comments! I've learned a lot! Where would be the fun if we all got along?! Haha! I'm sorry for being defensive, you've all brought a new ...

It started with my hair, and progressed to a kiss It started with me loving her and ended up like this Interesting how, instead of saying you loved each other, ...