Dark Pharaoh's Warning Poem

by Redfang18

Published May 7, 2011

In Dark Pharaoh\'s Poetry

PreviousNext

Night time, my playtime has come at last.
The Retribution I now cast
For I am Judge, Jury, and Execution
All in a body made for Retribution.
From my ancestor to me, judgement has no mercy.
From me to my host, I am sworn to secrecy.
My host is royal on her father's side,
But more like me than what's outside.
She calls me her spirit-friend, but holds me stone
For she is the Next Pharaoh, her and her alone.
I am Judge, Jury, and Execution, that job's large.
They call me Dark Pharaoh, gladly without charge.
Dare deny me and face my wrath,
For my anger's terrible aftermath
Involves Retribution which happens to be my power.
So stay from me during the Midnight hour.

Comments & reviews · 2
User avatar
Qoh16
Comment
Qoh16 commented Comment · May 8, 2011

Sorry chica. But i agree with ButterFinger. It does read more like prose than actual poetry. But it is a very good job. Keep it up. Happy writing!!! :)

16

User avatar
Butterfinger
Comment
Butterfinger commented Comment · May 7, 2011

This is definitely a different poem. To me, it's more like prose. It doesn't read like poetry to me. Good job!



I didn't know beards could do that ;)
— ShadowVyper