Butterfinger

Hi-Ya! I personally don't care if the title is spelled wrong. Every work deserves a review regardless if the title is spelled correctly. I really like this one! My favorite ...

Wow, this is a long one! It sounds more like lyrics to a song, I like it! Here's my comments: Like “yeah I’m so tough, don’t need nobody " End ...

This is kind of hard to get into because it's a longer piece. For me I got lost because the rhyming felt forced and that took away the whole meaning ...

Hi-ya! I couldn't really get into this one because it was firing off questions faster than a machine gun. I do like the story line to it, the girl finds ...

Hypocrites have ugly teeth With lies well strewn in all they reap And backs bent with tempers flaring Hearts are unworthy, thoughts are daring Hypocrites have spiny hair What do ...

Hi-ya! I didn't read the previous comments so they don't influence mine. Here's my comments! I see you staring at me Trying to figure out what's wrong I know it's ...

This has a lot of emotion and power in the word choice! I ' m tired of being ranged In your claustrophobic cell Love this line! Really it? ain't no ...

Hi-ya! I'm here to rip apart and toss away review your poem! First off, it's 'hear' not 'here' Second, I don't mean to be harsh, but I'm not feeling it. ...

Hi-ya! Here's my comments!: For the Being aware, Nightfall brings about a native truth. Interesting to think about! Dawn shines a blinding light upon the mundane circus of normality, Love ...

I love this!It reminds me of the song Back When by Tim Mcgraw! Love it! My favorite part: When being cool, Meant having the 64 pack, Of Crayola Crayons, With ...

Hi-ya! I think you have a brilliant start for a great poem! Right now as a reader, I feel like your telling me everything and not letting me see or ...

I'm a little confused by this, but here's my comments! I'm walking through these empty halls filled with memories of you surrounded by a silent darkness Love this! your feelings ...

Wow, I absolutely love this poem! I've had similar thoughts... relating to suicide...because the darkness came to corrupt and I was open to it at the time. Unlike the ending ...

Wow, there's already soooo many reviews!! You poem speaks a lot of truth that many people disregard. No matter what your religion, the way people treat you shouldn't be based ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed your poem! It flows nicely since you broke it up into stanzas! My favorite part: The thunder is A warning, But who Really listens? I ...