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Thanx guys. I just came up with it when i was out on a holiday. It's not based on the movie at all, though I have seen it too...found it ...

Wow, I really liked it. There was good description. Just a shame the way it ended so abruptly! Love to read more ;)

I do agree, you need to work on your rhyming. But i liked it because the end was very funny. It was a good poem, but could do with a ...

Lovely, I liked the plot of this one. I'd Love to hear more of it ;)

Wow, you put something so complex into words and even made it rhym! I really liked it, well done :)

heyy, thanks for the comments guys. I'll try and see what I can do to improve :)

heyy, thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it :)

I liked the differences in the caracters and the plot. But it was too random for me. Found it too cheesy, sorry

yes it does, thanks. It does get a bit off beat further in... I'll think about what changes i can do to improve ;) thanx for the correction

wow, it really touched me. I found it really romantic and adored the ending. Love to hear more, Good job! :D

haha thanx guys :)

thanks. I guess you may be right there Lavvi . . . never thought about it, good call haha ;)

I really liked it. It has a good meaning and could be used for many people in all sorts of different situations. Good Job :)

haha, thanks guys. I'll try and do that on my next poem i make. I'm glad you liked it :D

thanks guys! I did try and make it flow better but found it was quite dificult haha :$ thanx for the comments! ;)