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I really like this poem it's very cleverly thought out. I really love this line, "She went to walk the dog, one day
But took the cat instead.'" I thought that was super funny!
I really like this poem it's very cleverly thought out. I really love this line, "She went to walk the dog, one day
But took the cat instead.'" I thought that was super funny!
heyy, thanks for the comments guys. I'll try and see what I can do to improve
i really like this poem, but something seemed a little off to me. maybe make it a bit longer, or go into more detail about this friend? it ends a bit abruptly, if you added a little more length, i think this poem would be a great piece of work, especially with the theme you've got there. the imagrey is fantastic, although it could use a little more....Oomph for lack of better terminology. overall the poem is a very good start
Yeah I would slightly agree with Flyer, but I would say only try to find another word for either instead or blend, because that part does rhyme. Other than that it rhymes well. I like the thought of the poem, it sounds like you do have a really odd friend, but we are all odd in some way. In my opinion, Strange = diefferent, and different = an individual. keep up the writing.
Good. I liked the dual nature of the character. The line
doesn't quite jive rhythmically. Neither does It needs to be fixed.Keep it up.