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heyy, thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it
I can't think of any improvements that can be made, so I'll skip to what I like. It flows easily, and really catches your attention. The content is just amazing. All in all a great poem!
- Liz
Hey ! I love the rhymes adn the poem too
Good work.
Absolutely beautifull. Very inspiring.
Keep it up.