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Re: I Lost You
Hello, how are you doing? Hope you have been having a good/night! Wow, I have no idea what it's like to lose a friend to someone else, but this poem, ...
Sep 15, 2021 -
Re: Twisted Love: When Will I See You Again?
Hello, how are you doing? Hope your having a good day/night! Honestly, this really strikes me. Your poem is so...well it's a little sad. I find it very relatable. I ...
Sep 12, 2021 -
Re: Losing yourself
Hey hope you're doing okay, This is iconic. Losing yourself is probably one of the worsts things that can ever happen to a person. Every word. Every line. Everything that ...
Aug 10, 2021 -
Re: To the Forest
Hey, hope you're having a good day! I'm here with a quick review. I like your poem. The rhyme scheme isn't bad, however I noticed a few grammatical errors in ...
Aug 9, 2021 -
Re: It hurts; I don't care
Hello Wolf, This yet again another piece of literature I like. First off, I want to say how much I like the repetition. Secondly, this evokes a lot of emotion ...
Aug 9, 2021 -
Re: Stand By Me
How's it going? Again, another short poem but it still serves a substantial purpose. It can give the reader an idea of what two people need in a relationship, loyalty ...
Aug 9, 2021 -
Re: Friends ...
Hey Elizabeth, I can relate to this...About a year ago, my family and I moved away from our hometown. Ever since I haven't been able to make any friends in ...
Aug 9, 2021 -
Re: Injuries
Hey how you doing, FourLeafClover? I can't express how precise this is. I've definitely have been in the same situation as well and it isn't an enjoyable situation to be ...
Aug 9, 2021 -
Re: Never Let You Die
Hello again Wolf, This is a very small piece of writing, therefore it still serves a purpose. I have been looking for literature like this for a while now. "In ...
Aug 8, 2021 -
Re: Down the Memory Lane
Fantastic work! The rhyme scheme and word choice is very great but it also gives people a perspective on what could happen in a relationship. Basically what to expect. It ...
Aug 7, 2021 -
Re: We only go as far as we walk
I find this poetry rather interesting and realistic. Everything you write (as far as I know) relates to life and it can be portrayed in a unique way. "I wanted ...
Aug 7, 2021 - Re: Why sad poems? Aug 7, 2021
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Re: Twisted love: One sided love
It does hurt to love someone and to not get any love back in return. I believe that it was very bold of you to write something like this. People ...
Aug 7, 2021
