BookWolf

Ooo! :D Great description. Even though this is very short, I think this has amazing potential. You just need to work on placing commas and capitalizing after a period. Like ...

Hello, BookWolf here for a review! :D This was a very interesting story and I would LOVE to read more. :D Please tell me when you continue this. First off, ...

Awesome poem! :D Nice work! I can remember so many times when I was little how afraid I was in the dark, and how hard it was to go to ...

Hello, BookWolf here for a quick review! :D This was awesome! :D Like grey said, this is breathtaking. I love your choice of words and the length seemed perfect! I ...

Hello, BookWolf here for a review! :D Wow, this was really great! :) You did an awesome job of describing the journey home. I found that I could relate with ...

Ooo, I really liked this. :D You have awesome name choice and your writing style is interesting. My corrections; It was one of the main hellholes in Vermea but still ...

Hello, BookWolf here for a review! :D So, I've never read the other parts to this, but I really found this interesting. I really liked your writing style and I ...

This is really great! :D I'm just loving your cats' names, and the Clan names are cool, too. Awesome cliffhanger at the end, and I just loved the fight between ...

Okay, so I thought this story was pretty good. :D But you have to remember to put periods and make new paragraphs. That's the very basic of writing. I like ...

Nice work! :D I really enjoyed this and I loved the rhyme. I felt so much emotion coming from this and the words you used went SO smoothly. :D You ...

Okay, this was awesome! :D Especially for your first poem. I loved the rhyme and I thought that everything went so smoothly. Just one suggestion; You put 'I was by ...

This could easily be a story that you could continue! :D I see a lot of potential. But just this by itself is really good. I really liked how in ...

Well, I've never read the other parts, but I decided I needed to review something and found myself here. :D And I have to say I'm glad. Even though I ...

Haha, this is a great poem. :D Your choice of words went VERY smoothly, and I can't help but laugh at this poem. Not because I think is dumb, but ...

Wow. :D This is really great. I felt like you put a lot of hard work into this, and I can relate with it so much.