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BlueSunset

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Life's Clock

    Okie - dokie. :D I really like this poem, the first of it's type that I've read. The way you had the word "love" repetitive, was a great quality of ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Country of memories

    Hi, and happy review day! :D I'll be reviewing your poem today for you. I absolutely love that picture of yours at the top! I don't really find a lot ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Other Re: Plant Life

    Good job, this poem was a perfect amount of description, but not too much of it. Some poems can have too much description in them which makes it unclear of ...

    Jul 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: A Cryptic Something

    Well, hello! I'm here to give a review to your piece here. To start us off, I was wondering what was going on with the stanzas that you had here. ...

    Jul 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Free

    I'm Sunset, and I'll review your poem today, Verser! I'll try to make this a good, long review, but since it's a shorter poem, I might have some trouble. Anyways, ...

    Jul 6, 2015
  • Art » General, General Re: 1- Write the definition of your favorite word, according to you

    Hey, Selena! So, you're pretty new, aren't you? Well, welcome to the family. Now, let's see the nitpicks. To me the work expression means showcasing who you are and sharing ...

    Jul 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Two Worlds in One Home

    Hello, I'm here to review your poem. Before we begin, I love the way you had this be sort of a story inside this poem. I love how people do ...

    Jul 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Wish They Forgot About Me

    Here to review your poem, elitemaster! I loved the concept of this poem. That is very important to write about, and I'm proud to review this work. *claps hands* :D ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Senseless Hope

    Hey, Don! Nice poem you got here. I love the shortness of this poem, yet you still added enough detail that it's fine that it is short. You put four ...

    Jun 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Visible and The Invisible- Chapter 1

    Hello! I've decided to come and return a review to you, Prakash. Let's start with the nitpicks, okay? First things first, when you have someone talking, for example: "I am ...

    Jun 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Real Love

    Hey, @speakerskat! Nice poem you've got here. :D My first nitpick that I found in this work of yours was: Yet human nature bids us try Try and try again ...

    Jun 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Blank Canvas

    Hey, CaptainSalty! I am here to review. Let's start with the nitpicks. As I just ran over this poem one more time, I stumbled on this stanza: From one paint ...

    Jun 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Colorblind

    Wow, I'm really surprised how this turned out. :D This totally deserved the spotlight. So congrats, SnazzyPencil, for another successful piece written. :) But maybe we can't see all the ...

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Bumble Bee

    Hey, Snazzy. I'll try to make this review long, so here goes nothing. >.< Ha ha! It got you! Right on the ear! Oh, and what now? A glistening tear! ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Flower

    Cute poem, Scribbles! I want to start off by pointing out something I like. It was nice that you were referring to the flower as "you". It was a cool ...

    May 31, 2015


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