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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: This Girl

    Hey there! Sun here for a quick, short review today! :D What a wonderful piece you've got here! Everything goes very well with the theme you've set up. Since this ...

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Melodramatic

    Hiya there, FallWolf! Sun here to review your short story! :D This made me mentally giggle. A lot. It almost made me want to giggle for real, but that would ...

    Nov 22, 2015
  • Other » Humor, General Re: Band Instrument Studies

    I loved this! This reminded me of my band class. I love to imagine my band class saying this, it'd probably be pretty funny because the flutes always complain that ...

    Nov 13, 2015
  • Other » General, Literature Re: Crush

    Wow! First poem! :D Honestly, this was a great poem, especially someone who I haven't read from yet. You have amazing poetry skills, like amazing. This is definitely worth the ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Mary (Working Title)

    Howdy! Sunset here to review, but you can call me Sun. :D As you can see, I am here to review this piece of yours. First reaction? This piece kind ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Deep Down

    Aloha, I see you've written a piece of poetry here! Well, to get this review all started off and into business, I'd like to first point out my most favorite ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Humor Re: '22' Parody

    That was hilarious! That ramen part especially, though. Of all things, you decided to use ramen! *wipes away tears from laughing* Okay, let's get down to business. The parody idea ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: Blossoming and Blooming

    Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and happy review day! Most importantly about this poem that I liked was it's message to everyone. To fight for your life and ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Humor, General Re: Two Things That Might Influence Your Child

    Happy Review Day, wisegirl22! :D One thing I must tell you first: This was funny but interesting at the same time. The way you added both together great! I also ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Wings

    Hiya! And happy Review Day to you! ;) This is a sweet short story. I think what's beset about it is the importance of it and how everyone can and ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: The Other Side

    Happy Review Day! I'll start the review off by a few nitpicks I saw. A place were past, present, and future "were," should be "where". This also happened again here ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Counting Stars

    Hello, Tigerlilly! I'm Sunset, here to review your poem. Speaking of which, let's begin! :D I like this. The simplicity of this poem fitted very well indeed with the topic, ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I Am A Woman.

    Happy Review Day, and great poem! :D :) I think it's very important to be proud of being a woman, so with that, I am proud to be a woman. ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: I'm Sorry [2] | Edited

    Hey! I definitely liked this, it was yet again a wonderful piece. :D With that, let's begin. We won't always get along. There's a eight year gap between us. Maybe, ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: I'm Sorry | Edited

    This is... incredible! Wonderfully written, just wonderful! I am a younger sister myself, and this was just a meaningful wonderful piece for me. I bet it was for everyone else, ...

    Jul 26, 2015


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