BlueSunset

Hello, @regismare! I'll be reviewing your piece. I'd first like to point out that although this topic is simple, you do go in depth with your thoughts and I respect ...

Hello there! I see you're a pretty new member here on YWS? Great to read other people's works! I'll be reviewing your short story today. :D Things to Potentially Fix ...

Hey there, Lau! I'm Sunset, and I will be reviewing your short story today. Quite an intense and interesting idea you've got going around here. Before I get much into ...

Wow! What a very descriptive and beautiful piece! I'm BlueSunset, and I will be reviewing your short story today. ;) This was nice and detailed. I think that was what ...

Hello there, @Empires! Lovely work here. Review Day is coming up, and I feel the need to stretch out my reviewing skills and prepare for the event. I'm Sunset, by ...

Hey there, @tfioslove! Nice to see a fresh piece of poetry ready to be review! Hopefully, my review will be helpful in a way that will improve your writing. ^_^ ...

Hello, TheRaven0606 ! I'll be reviewing your piece today. Can't wait to get into it! :D Let's start this thing off. :) I'm going to just point out some nitpicks ...

Howdy, mungerverna! I'm BlueSunset and I will be reviewing your poem for today! :D Big or small my review may be, I hope it will help you nevertheless in improving ...

Hello there, I'm BlueSunset. I'll be reviewing your work for today. Firstly, I would like to point out the effort and product of rhyme in this piece. I don't usually ...

Hello there! I will be here to try and review (some) of this piece, for my lack of reviewing skills and its length due to the amount of chapters contained ...

Hello there, geoffles. I am BlueSunset . Before I start any small piece of this actual review, I would just like to point out that I haven't written a review ...

Blue here to give a review! :D I'd like to start by pointing out the cute romance in this short story. I think it's sweet and definitely plays along with ...

Hello, Rosy. I will be reviewing this short story for today. :D Imagery was obviously a huge part of your short story. I love how you included the seagulls, the ...

What's up, DragonWriter22? Well, obviously a fantastically creative poem, I see. :D I can't imagine how much time this must've took, and I'm very glad that you had the time ...

Yo, ChocolateCello. I'll be reviewing your poem today. This was quite a successful poem, compared to others with the same subject as yours. Although I would point out that writing ...