BlueGlow

An interesting work to be sure but I would like to come along and drop a bit of criticism. This work feels a bit confused and I got lost in ...

This is a very emotional work and I love it for that. The imagery is decent as well, nothing too special but not too bad either. You communicate the emotions ...

Ah now this is a brilliant piece of work! Absolutely brilliant visual language which is something i am starting to expect from your work. If you wanted to make this ...

Hello! Welcome to the YWS! A few thoughts on your work, first off love the theme! Most everyone can relate to feeling homesick at some point. However, i feel that ...

Let me tell you right now, this checked all the boxes for me as being something incredibly interesting! An enigmatic scarecrow, the end of the world, and maybe even a ...

This is a fantastically interesting idea and I love it! However, my main problem is the occasional grammar error that takes me out of the story and snaps me out ...

This is a very interesting poem. The descriptive, visual language is really great! It creates a sort of unpleasant feeling towards the suburban nightmare which really is a feat. However, ...

This is a very interesting concept for poem! You've excellently put words to the desire for fame however, as this is a piece of poetry I would recommend you use ...

This was... very interesting to say the least. I have to admit, this struck a chord with me and I can't quite put my finger on why. It feels religious ...

The visuals in this work are brilliant as I've come to expect from the author. The subject matter as well is one that hasn't been worked to death which makes ...

A continuation of the story of Captain Drey? Awesome! You previously received a lot of criticism for Drey's "final" act and i'm glad to see that you not only addressed ...

This poem is a very emotional and personal poem and i admire it for that. I do agree that those colours could be replaced with more visual words; especially by ...

I absolutely love this! Your visual imagery is superb! You seem to have a fascination with geology which leads to incredibly interesting visuals. This poem reflects the emotion of wasting ...

An interesting poem and one that portrays a fairly unhappy person in great detail. You definitely are able to convey an emotion through your poems which is an important part ...

This was an incredibly beautiful and emotional piece despite the author's goal of practicing descriptions. Your story carries a great message and I applaud you for it. As some people ...