Blackwood

This is a very sweet poem. It is short and effective. I like how it gets the theme across clearly and stays true to its mood and style. The final ...

This is such a lovely poem. I like how it is set out as well so that is clear the contrasting views. There are just a couple of lines that ...

This is a very good and descriptive poem. A couple of things: Be consistent in your capitalization. In the first paragraph everything was lowercase then you started adding capitals. This ...

Hello there, time for some reviewing! I like reviewing lyrics because I also review them musically and I have a couple of things to say about these. Content-wise, they are ...

This is great. I have nothing to comment on in terms of content because it is all very good. Just a couple of picky things. You use "she said" very ...

This is what I look for in a relationship-y poem even though I don't tend to them. It is not cliche which is a biggie to me. I get easily ...

I am assuming this is a continuation of the story. Its still good but to be honest I think the first one was a little better in content. The structure ...

This is a very dramatic and sombre poem. Which has som nice descriptions. Something you could think about are: Metaphores: Some would be very effective in places. Wording: "I didnt ...

This is a cute poem. It seems that the kitchen lives quite a troubled life. With a few tweaks you could make this really impacting. 1. Check your capital letters. ...

Firstly I think that for this poem you need to make it into poetic stanzas. At the moment it seems to be a block of text which, even if it ...

This is really great. It would be nice if you could find the short story online to link it so we can read it. The poem is nice and light ...

Its so refreshing to see something not completely sombre and depressing or romantic in poetry for once. This poem was fun and very good for '5th grade' (I'm not sure ...

I started reading this and I will gladly review if you do something for me first. I'm not judging your content of writing but your formatting is not good. Can ...

I really like the idea. Is this here one whole story with every four lines your separate poems or is this the first of a series you are going to ...

I told you a couple of hints so here are the reminders. Who is James? Who are elementals? The reader needs to know these things or else they feel like ...