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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: A sad Facebook love story chapters one to two

    Hello, Nyanya and welcome to youngwriterssociety.com! I must say, this is a rather interesting work. Whether or not it's autobiographical doesn't make a difference in the...creativity of posting it? I

    Jul 16, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Petals, Passion, and the Bay

    Hello ancientfire33 and welcome to The Young Writers Society! I'll be honest with you in this review. Part of me truly thinks this poem was wonderfully thought out and that ...

    Jul 16, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Cinderella

    Hello, futurepoetofamerica! Emotional, thought provoking and exceptionally well done. Those are the only terms that come to mind as I think of what to say about this poem. For starters, ...

    Jul 16, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Spiritual Re: Victims

    Hello! Wonderful, wonderful poem! At first I was actually only skimming this poem, as I was listening to music and had to take my dog on a walk. As I ...

    Jul 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Beautiful Dreamer

    Hello! I really enjoyed this poem. In fact, I've been reading poems more or less all day on both this website and other places on the web, and I can ...

    Jul 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Mine

    Wonderful poem. It's short, simple and to the point. The imagery that lies within the depths of the poem made it feel incredibly life like and gave a true sense ...

    Jul 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Maiden of Grief

    Hello Forestqueen808! I liked this poem quite a bit! I felt that every stanza worked, both on their own and as a piece of the larger, more expansive and informative ...

    Jul 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: You

    Hello! I enjoyed this poem immensely. The storytelling techniques were superb and I feel everything flowed smoothly as I read it. There were some very small grammatical mistakes that I ...

    Jul 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Drinking the Day

    Hi! This was a very enjoyable poem! I felt that it was relatively easy to understand and made good use of storytelling techniques. I liked the fact that it was ...

    Jul 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Morning Kiss

    Hello smallfri, This poem was very enjoyable. It wasn't one hundred perfect, but I personally had fun reading it and then reading it once again, trying to understand it better. ...

    Jul 13, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Xavier Teal Malone Chapter 1

    I liked the story that was in this text piece, a lot. Meaning, in my unprofessional opinion, should go before anything else in works of art and literature. A painting ...

    Jul 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Me.

    I enjoyed this poem to quite a great extant. It read very well, and nothing really stood out that was bad. There was one change which I thought would better ...

    Jul 13, 2012
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Batman's Bat Messages (for Jared's contest)

    Heh, this was very enjoyable. I liked the humor throughout the text and felt that the work read smoothly throughout.

    Jul 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Goodbye

    I liked this poem. It connected with the audience on a personal level yet kept us distanced from itself so we were still wondering just what the heck was going ...

    Jun 1, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: White As Snow--Prologue

    Wonderful. Just wonderful. I'll be honest and say that I came to this work not expecting much (not to be rude, this type of work just doesn't usually help thoughts ...

    May 29, 2012


We think in generalities, but we live in details.
— Alfred North Whitehead