Beautifulsparkle

Hello, this is a very interesting flash story. When I read it I image a young boy or girl venturing into their parent's room and looking, on a whim, at ...

Hello, i am here to review the poem. I think it is a beautiful poem with a great message. I like how you make it rhyme yet at the same ...

Hello, i am here to review. I like your story, it is very interesting. I like that the main character is a girl and the first scene caught my attention, ...

Hey, i am here for a review. Your story is interesting and makes me want to read more. I feel really bad for Evangeline, seeing that accident on t.v. and ...

Hello, this is a very beautiful, intricate poem. I like how the narrator wants to express himself, thinking it is just a dash of sadness that he should laught at ...

Hello, i believe the poem is very a very tragic one, the narrator is talking about a time where his emotions sort of betrayed him or her and the self ...

Hello, this poem was a very beautiful one especially because it's about a father describinghis infant daughter. I think there was a lot of emotion in this poem, and i ...

Hello, your poem is very realistic and is talking about the dangers of meeting people on the internet and falling for them. That is indeed very dangerous as you do ...

Hello, i am here to review this poem. I believe it is a very beautiful poem and very realistic as it talks about the misery and hardships of life, not ...

Hello, i'm here to review this poem. I liked yow you described Lady Berry with "eyes of dark and perfectly ripe berries" and "dark brown hair that curls and bounces ...

Your poem is sort of amusing. I was imagining a shrieking person panicking or perhaps wispering at the sight of a real scorpion. I'm not afraid of scorpions but i'm ...

Your poem is amazing, i like the rhyming and the the theme of the poem. It pictures a scene of a battle exactly how it should be and it does ...

I like your poem, it reminds me that i have to study something for tomorrow and that i'am procrastinating. It's a little funny how a poem can bring out many ...

Hello, i believe this is a very beautiful poem and very realistic about humanity's desire to reach the sky even though they're stuck on the ground. I've often had many ...

I like the description about the periwinkle because i love flowers, i think they symbolise beauty. Of course flowers have their own victorian language and there are many meanings that ...