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Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited
This story is very deep and the message is very emotional and eye opening. The first word that comes to a lot of people's mined about sexual abuse is a ...
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friend
This is a super cool poem! I love the idea and overall structure. It's not often nowadays you find poems that rhyme, and I think that that added a lot ...
Jun 14, 2015 -
Re: Prologue
I legitimately am in love with this piece of writing! Like I think that this is probably the best price that I have read on this site! I want you ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: When you know
Okay, this short story is super intriguing and cool to read. You have a way with words and I thin that it really sows through this poem. You intrigued me ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: What lies beneath the smiles
Wow! What I can tell you right now is you are an amazing friend to your strong and brave friend! This'd own is so real and full of raw emotion. ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: “I was prepared but it still hurt.”
Okay, so first off I read this all the way through and I found myself agreeing with just about everything you wrote. I'm taking that this piece is in your ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: Prologue: Colors Beyond
Okay, so as I usually review poems this novel thing is a sorta new thing for me, but I do want to review this piece to just give some feedback ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: oculus reparo
Okay, this poem is legit. I a solitary love it! I honestly have never seen anything like, and that my friend should be take as a compliment. I think that ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: Demi Lovato Loves Sketchers
Alright, this is clever what more is there to say? You know how I were and how to give humor to it. I have a feeling there is no deeper ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: I Will
Okay, so this poem has so much truth about a topic I am very passionate about. I thin this poem you have written really spreads a realistic message that more ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 2: Chapter 10:Ghost (Pt.2)
Wow! So I usually revew poems and this is sorta new for me, but I really want to review this and I am so psyched that I came across your ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: Ground Mass
Okay, so this poem was a lot different from anything I have ever read, and I hope you take that as a complement. In your description it said something about ...
Jun 7, 2015 -
Re: Facing Fear
Wow! That's exactly what this poem is... Wow! You description was on point. Your words were very well written. And your overall message was truly impactful. This poem has so ...
Jun 7, 2015 -
Re: Why I Am Not Beautiful
This was such an amazing poem! I think that this poem spreads a message that needs to be sent to more people, Nd I think that people need to start ...
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: My Angel
If I could describe your poem with one word it would be: Beautiful. You are more than an author... you are an artist painting a picture with words you have ...
Jun 4, 2015
