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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited

    This story is very deep and the message is very emotional and eye opening. The first word that comes to a lot of people's mined about sexual abuse is a ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Imaginary Friend

    This is a super cool poem! I love the idea and overall structure. It's not often nowadays you find poems that rhyme, and I think that that added a lot ...

    Jun 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Prologue

    I legitimately am in love with this piece of writing! Like I think that this is probably the best price that I have read on this site! I want you ...

    Jun 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: When you know

    Okay, this short story is super intriguing and cool to read. You have a way with words and I thin that it really sows through this poem. You intrigued me ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: What lies beneath the smiles

    Wow! What I can tell you right now is you are an amazing friend to your strong and brave friend! This'd own is so real and full of raw emotion. ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: “I was prepared but it still hurt.”

    Okay, so first off I read this all the way through and I found myself agreeing with just about everything you wrote. I'm taking that this piece is in your ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Prologue: Colors Beyond

    Okay, so as I usually review poems this novel thing is a sorta new thing for me, but I do want to review this piece to just give some feedback ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: oculus reparo

    Okay, this poem is legit. I a solitary love it! I honestly have never seen anything like, and that my friend should be take as a compliment. I think that ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Satire Re: Demi Lovato Loves Sketchers

    Alright, this is clever what more is there to say? You know how I were and how to give humor to it. I have a feeling there is no deeper ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I Will

    Okay, so this poem has so much truth about a topic I am very passionate about. I thin this poem you have written really spreads a realistic message that more ...

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Black Eyes Book 2: Chapter 10:Ghost (Pt.2)

    Wow! So I usually revew poems and this is sorta new for me, but I really want to review this and I am so psyched that I came across your ...

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ground Mass

    Okay, so this poem was a lot different from anything I have ever read, and I hope you take that as a complement. In your description it said something about ...

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Facing Fear

    Wow! That's exactly what this poem is... Wow! You description was on point. Your words were very well written. And your overall message was truly impactful. This poem has so ...

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Why I Am Not Beautiful

    This was such an amazing poem! I think that this poem spreads a message that needs to be sent to more people, Nd I think that people need to start ...

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: My Angel

    If I could describe your poem with one word it would be: Beautiful. You are more than an author... you are an artist painting a picture with words you have ...

    Jun 4, 2015


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