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Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 3
I like this a lot. It's real in a way, about as real as you can get with dragons that is, but still, the emotions resonate in a way that ...
Apr 12, 2021 -
Re: The Year of the Rat Kings
Wo, this is horrifying. If I were a publisher right now I would publish you. I am so not going to sleep tonight. Ugh. I can't even write right now. ...
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: Martyr
I like this a lot. Wo, I am still in shock. The terms, the song, everything is perfectly well written. if I were a publisher right now, apart from a ...
Mar 31, 2021 -
Re: Waiting for a Day That Will Never Come
I like this poem. The descriptive imagery is nice. I don't know much about poem formatting, so I won't comment on that. There is a feeling in this poem that ...
Mar 31, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 1
I like this just as much as the former chapter. It is rich with descriptive imagery. The pictures, in the beginning, are a stroke of genius. They show me what ...
Mar 30, 2021 -
Re: Dread
I like the vibe I am getting from this piece. It is totally engrossing and very nice. By the way, dude you are ancient, what retirement home are you in, ...
Mar 26, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Prologue
I like your map a lot, did you make it? If I were a publisher, right now I would publish this work no questions asked. The first lines alone transport ...
Mar 24, 2021 -
Re: onion layers
I like this poem, and the font is different. The idea is quite good. It is frankly true, (I really like onions). I am not good with formatting poems, but ...
Mar 23, 2021 -
Re: Stormy Skies
Hmm, I love, and appreciate, this piece of work. Sadly I can relate, my brother was hit by an 18 wheeler, now he wheels around in a wheelchair, and is ...
Mar 23, 2021 -
Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 1.2
I am so ready for the next chapter. Did you have to stop? I was really enjoying this. The style with which you write is very nice. It's refreshing in ...
Mar 23, 2021 -
Re: A Treasure That Is Greater Than Gold
I like the poem. I normally don't review poems but I liked this one so I had to say something. Others may disagree, but this line "It sits in the ...
Mar 23, 2021 -
Re: Welcome To wonderland pt 1
I like this story so far a lot. It has this dreamy quality that makes it inviting. The flow is nice, and the hook is great. I like the name ...
Mar 23, 2021 -
Re: Here Comes the Sun
Wo, I really like this. The world comes alive in dizzying colors and is starkly real. I can envision it all. That is the sign of a good writer, not ...
Mar 22, 2021 -
Re: What do tears cost?
Hm, interesting. I like this. I do not personally speaking think crying is worthless. It is a proven fact that crying is good for mental health. It is ten times ...
Mar 22, 2021 -
Re: Stones and Stars
I am not one to comment on poems usually, but stones and stars, who couldn't love a title like that. I like this poem. The imagery, the flow, yeah, you ...
Mar 22, 2021
