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Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 5
Hallu!!As usual i am here to rescue my fav dragons(though Zoltar and others tug my heartstrings too)from the green lets begin U know u r awesome.I am incredibly happy to ...
Jul 22, 2019 -
Re: No Escape
OMG!!You weren't kidding when you said horror.I literally had chills down my back the whole time i was reading this and the fact that it is nightime here and i ...
Jul 21, 2019 -
Re: A Tale of Hastir: Frostfall part 1
Hallu!!Am here to rescue this godly piece from the depths of Tartaurus(otherwise known as the green room).I loved your description style.I mean its sooooo beautiful.Especially the opening para was bre
Jul 20, 2019 -
Re: Birthday Balloons
Oh!!The dude has Globophobia.Lol!!That was really funny and lighthearted.I enjoyed it immensely.You portrayed so well the fears of parents for their rapidly growing children along side the whole ballo
Jul 19, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 21
Danggg!That General is Gruff.The fight between kkachi and general Dal was absolutely spot on.I loved this action packed chapter.OMG!!Other teacher kkachis mother as a good spirit has been teaching her
Jul 18, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Nineteen
Oh!!Zoltar ofcourse it was right for you to play the hero.U r a hero!!I am glad to see Emerald back.I think Zoltar is going to help her in a way ...
Jul 17, 2019 -
Re: Least Romantic: Chapter Three: It's a Sign!
Damn why do these jealoused,stupid bullies need to destroy perfectly happy stuff??And why does Ala keeps getting cuter and cuter.I enjoyed reading this chapter just as much as the others.I ...
Jul 16, 2019 -
Re: Least Romantic: Chapter Two: A Twist and a Lie
Thats too short*whines*.I see Miss Tiana is gonna grow up to be McKenzie's(from Dork diaries)double part.Poor Ala but i know she will live though it with her prince was such ...
Jul 16, 2019 -
Re: Least Romantic: Chapter One: At Preschool
Hallu!Here to rescue this adorbs story from the green room.Thats quite a unique story quite a few novels feature pre school heroes.But i guess since this is humorous so pre ...
Jul 16, 2019 -
Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 4
Hallu!!At your service AGAIN.Like always you have out did yourself.Smoothness is there,stillness is there,calmness is there,humour is there OH WAIT!!humour is not here.Yes i think you need to add a ...
Jul 15, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 11
Hallu!At your service madame.Lets begin i totally loved this chapter.You r improving so rapidly.There was a lot of emotion in this chapter which had been lacking previously so that felt ...
Jul 15, 2019 -
Re: Just Upload!
Lol!I loved this short yet fullfilling portrayed the feelings of waiting for a certain procrastinating writer so well.Its repetitiveness felt so good unlike most poems.Now the whole poem is humming ...
Jul 14, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 11
Read this fricking Awesome novel in seriously one go.I don't even have words to explain its amazingness.Its just so intense and interesting,cute and freaky at the same time certainly a ...
Jul 13, 2019 -
Re: The last song
Hallo!Am here to review this awesome poem.I don't review poetry much but it was so catchy i couldn't help it so bear with me First off the blending of the ...
Jul 12, 2019 -
Re: Crooked
OMG!!I loved this so has so much feel to it.You showed your pain through these words so well i could almost feel it.The words and rhymes you have used blend ...
Jul 11, 2019
