Audy

Rhia sofia, I like your poem-ia. No, seriously. I do. The speaker's voice is right there in my ear, and she (it's definitely a she for me) is sassy and ...

Hey Lazyllama! Short, simple, and to the point! I'll try to reflect that in my own review for this piece (which is actually my weakness, so this'll be a challenge! ...

Hey BrittanyNicole! My name is also my username, I like how we are both so simple about it c: So, enough intro, and I'll dig right into this! Form. Right ...

I love this, As I read that end line, I heard the "noise" of passing traffic in my head. Is that something this poem evokes (does anyone else feel a ...

Athought, This is a beautiful piece. I've actually worked in the housing management industry (though apartments, not quite real estate) so I have a special fondness/can relate to this poem. ...

Hey Scar! ooo so I'm a notorious title-skipper, and so when I read through this poem the ending actually came as a delightful surprise in summing up and providing context ...

Hey Usero! I like how you experimented with the perspective and point of view in this poem. The cigarette becomes personified as a person, and whether or not you meant ...

Hey Emmveepi! What I enjoyed about the poem was the progression from the narrator's place in the beginning: knowing that s/he loves him, wishing and longing for him; to the ...

Hey Indie, You have some great narration here that really illustrates the struggle of faith, the fear of failing but also a sense of the love of it too. Your ...

Yo Sparkie! So, the start of the poem "silence shed tears" is like y'ieck. Boring. Too much like "silent tears" which is very emo-toned. But this: the skin of the ...

Hey Fortis, This was interesting in that it it reveals the bleakness of Poe's inception poe-m and acts as a reconciliation from it delivering hope and a positive outlook! That ...

Hey Zolen! What little the ear does share to its nature I took this to mean that you're personifying the ear here. Almost like the "essence of ear" has little ...

Pers, There's not much I can offer for you technical-wise, so this is just going to be about my impressions/exploration. For disclaimer's sake, I'm just going to say right now ...

Every time I read one of your poems, it is a stab to my heart. You know the expression mind-fuck? Except this is like :'-) a heart-fuck? OO_oo...except that that ...

Aw, Sparkie, I love this poem. Insane. So, here's what to love: FORM!