Asith

Hey, this is a really nice concept! I'm actually intrigued - definitely going to read more if you'll post it here! I noticed a strange divide between the first half ...

I have no clue about anything Doctor Who related, but I thought it would be worth pointing out the fallacies in your actual writing. Don't be disheartened, but there are ...

As a hobbyist songwriter myself, I was intrigued, and this is genuinely one of the best amateur-written pieces I've heard. I am by no means a professional or even professionally-taught, ...

I enjoyed the premise, and the writing was generally sound - but reviews are meant to point out potential room for improvement, so we'll jump into the constructive criticism. To ...

Hi again I enjoyed the concept - actually giving the Lying forest a reason for its name, and bringing out the defining concepts of truths and lies was very interesting ...

God, this is a brilliant piece - and that's coming from someone who looks at these virginity-loss stories with apprehension. I love how real it is. It's so raw; it's ...

Hello! Your title caught my eye, and I'm glad it did, so I'll leave a review :) You'll have to forgive me if the review seems more like a list ...

Well well well, it looks like I'm back at this story again. I'll focus on speech this time, since you asked for it. To begin with, you should look up ...

Hey, since I reviewed your first chapter, I thought I might as well talk about this one too :) I must of woken up after the worst of the storm ...

Welcome to the site, you no avatar cutie you :) Asith here to drop off a step-by-step review. I'm gonna be pointing out a lot of things that have room ...

Please, please use proper puntuation. I'm sorry, but as pointless as it may seem, it's very important! Your story is essentially unreadable like this, and anyone who does read it ...

Wow, this was moving, to say the least! As far as short extracts go, this is one of my favourites :) You do a good job of setting the scene ...

Firstly, welcome:) Kudos for having the courage the post some of your work here, as new as you may be. That being said, your story has many things not up ...

Hey there, it's been a few days but hopefully, you're still here. Firstly, please understand that in no way am I trying to hurt your feelings, I just want to ...

Hey, this is little late, but I felt like leaving a review on your work. Halfway into the story I realised this was a 'Part 2', and I haven't read ...