Ashley123

This was an interesting poem about how you and your brother live in different time zones. It was actually a cool concept about how you guys literally live a time ...

Once again, this poem is REALLY good. But, then again, I know nothing about poetry. I could really feel your emotions that you have been feeling and have once felt, ...

I liked how you portrayed the sense of reality in a different way than most people would think. How you showed that reality is really dark and demented, and that ...

Welcome to YWS, I hope that you write more. Anyway, I thought that the poem was really good. I could literally see the picture that you were painting in my ...

I liked how detailed your story was. I found it really cool how you narrated the story from the cat's perspective, I thought that that was pretty clever. I also ...

I thought that this was a really nice letter to somebody that obviously felt like a brother to you. A close friend maybe? Anyway, here's for the review part. I ...

I thought that this poem was nicely written and was very emotional. I could sort of feel the emotions that you were feeling when you were writing this poem. It ...

I really liked the idea of the main character killing her best friend because of some bickering about yoga. Ha. I thought that it was really cool how in the ...

This poem is very deep, and is just overall emotional. What I got from it, the main character is having sad feelings and is missing a now dead friend. I ...

I thought that this was a pretty good story about an unstable family. It showed how this concept is usually an everyday thing to these kids, sadly. I thought that ...

This is a very interesting short excerpt. I thought that it was pretty humorous, and I look forward to the next episode. Also, I would like to welcome you to ...

I really like this poem. It really portrays lots of emotion, and deep down feelings. I feel like the poem flows alright, although of course it could be better; everything ...

I think that's this piece is a really sweet letter to your loved one. I think that it really shows emotion, and that you are trying to show it through ...

I really liked how descriptive you were with the main character's actions and what was really happening throughout the story. I loved how at the end he randomly woke up ...

This story is really confusing. Based on the title, I had assumed that maybe it was some action and adventure story, but instead it made no sense. This is more ...