Young Writers Society

Hey peoples, i am made second story. Here is link:
Meow Meow Cat Story: The story two

This is so random! It's amazing!
I can't believe people actually gave reviews.
Best review yet:
This is my favorite graphic novel since twilight! I can't read to wait more!
This makes me think of how writing good has gotten over the hours. I will read this to my babies and children for generations because we need to keep good books and writing like this alive! Keep writing good!

I like how you developed the Moew Moew Cat character and his brother henry, but I wonder if you could add more about his dad carlos he seemed very intresting the way he was clean and learned a ball the was my favorite part.

This story is so relatable because when he says I will put your walls it reminds me of trump.

Again this is my favorite story and thank you for the good work.

This is my favorite graphic novel since twilight! I can't read to wait more!
This makes me think of how writing good has gotten over the hours. I will read this to my babies and children for generations because we need to keep good books and writing like this alive! Keep writing good!

I like how you developed the Moew Moew Cat character and his brother henry, but I wonder if you could add more about his dad carlos he seemed very intresting the way he was clean and learned a ball the was my favorite part.

This story is so relatable because when he says I will put your walls it reminds me of trump.

Again this is my favorite story and thank you for the good work.

This story is really confusing. Based on the title, I had assumed that maybe it was some action and adventure story, but instead it made no sense. This is more of a poem or a song more than a story. It just doesn't have any strong characters, or anything that I can really comprehend. I hope that you don't stop writing, and don't give up. Label this more as a poem next time, because your really poetic.

This left me very confused. Based on the title and description, I was expecting the epic story of Meow Meow Cat... and this does not seem like that at all. It is lyrical, but the grammar rarely makes sense, as does the narrative. It sounds more like the song of someone fighting back and rebelling, rather than a cat. I suppose, if you were intending cats to have nonsensical grammar and lack of understanding, this might be able to make more sense. Some specific lines:

I'm clean I learned a ball

The failure of the concerned block the light

destroyed

However, the use of force in

As far as I know now, will be able to let off

I run my own

As far as I know now, will be able to let off

Do not say I'm walking

This was interesting. It was a little hard to understand, so I'd recommend putting it into paragraphs. I think you should actually label this as poetry because this was pretty poetic. Keep writing things like this!