Ashkitten83

Hi, I’m Ashkitten and I’m here for a review. I must say, this was very well written. I feel like there is double meaning here. The fight for the dawn ...

I feel like I need more from you. I want so badly to feel something from this poem but there's just one little thing missing. The rhymes are a bit ...

I find this to be a perfect anthem for equality. I love the juxtaposition of the fight between two natural forces, but the fight being unnatural. I like that it's ...

Brilliant! Brilliant!Brilliant!Brilliant!Brilliant!Brilliant! Hiya!! Ashkitten here for a review. I just want to say I loved it. I felt so taken by the whole concept. It took my mind so many ...

Hiya! Ashkitten here for a review. I like the idea of life being like a train ride, and I like the way you made it very relatable. I also like ...

Hiya!! Ashkitten here for a review. Already turning blue, numbness fills my limps and penetrates my bones to their core. limbs is spelled wrong The silence is madness. So thick, ...

Hellloooo!!!!!!! Ashkitten here for a review. I loved the way this was narrated into two different points of view. I think you did a great job describing the horror that ...

I loved it. Quite humorous. I love that you took something so ordinary as a sneeze and made a whole entire story around it. I also love the little bit ...

I thoroughly enoyed this poem. I feel like the bouncing around from idea to idea is a lot how our thoughts bounce around so erratically. I have lately been practicing ...

I really love the imagery, and the character descriptions. You are very descriptive and to me, that is the most important part of writing. I felt like I was right ...

Hello, Ashkitten here for a review. I see that other reviewers have touched on most of the grammatical errors, like the misspelling of beech (beach) trough (through) write (white) but ...

Hello, Ashkitten here for a review. Im going to commend you first on your ability to capture the best things about a deep relationship in this poem and essentially everything ...

Hello! Ashkitten here for a review. I love and adore the idea. The personification of an eating disorder in this way is so horrific, and yet makes such a great ...

Hello!!! Ashkitten here for a review. How do you forget, those dumb mistakes you've made. How do you let them go to fly away in the wind. How do you ...

This is by far the best poem I've read on this site!! Hello, Ashkitten here for a review. Sometimes when people copy an idea, it seems forced because they are ...