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Re: 1.2.3
Hello Pattyperfection! Happy Review Day! My name is Ari and I will be reviewing your lyrics today. This is actually very good for your first piece on here. I like ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: hint one
Hi! I'm Ari and I am going to review your poem! This poem has a simple meaning but is very intricately written. Some people might say that is very unnecessary, ...
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: roses and shores
Hi! I'm Ari and I shall review your poem today. I broke the review into 5 sections to make it easier to read. 1.Are you the sea or the shore? ...
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: bittersweet
Hi! It's Ari and I'm here to review your work! :D First, let me tell you some qualities that I really loved in here: 1.I don't think you will find ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: dear you
Wow Kara! Our past lives are so similar! Except, I went through all that WITHOUT any friends! But before I talk about all that, I want to review your work! ...
Oct 6, 2017 -
Re: Inner Demons
Hi! I am Ari, proud daughter and servant of King Christ Jesus! Today, I am going to review your amazing song! I think for the most part, it was pretty ...
Oct 2, 2017 -
Re: Letter INdestructibULL
Happy Review Day! I have come to do a review of your poem! Mister Frand Frand, you are my favorite writer on here for a reason. This reason is your ...
Jul 30, 2017 -
Re: seasoned skin
Happy Review Day, Falconer! I'm Ari and I shall be writing you a nice review on this glorious day! Something that I really liked about this is that you used ...
Jul 30, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
Hey! Sorry i'm late for the party! As you know, I have been recently been accused of spam so I am here to actually try to write a review that ...
Jul 23, 2017 -
Re: Headache (parody of "Eyelash")
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Jul 22, 2017
-leh Calls 911- ITS ME AGAIN!!!!! SAND AN AMBULENCE FEEERRRRRRRRSSSSSTTTT!!! MAH FRAND IS DIEIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LEH HEADACHE IS EVIIIILL! IT'S LIKE LEH EYELASHHHHHHH BUT LIKE 99999999999999999 -
Re: Limitless Prospect
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! I KNEW YOU WHERE PRETTY UNPREDICTABLE BUT I NEVER SUSPECTED SOMETHING LIKE THIS WHILE STALKING -cough- -cough- I MEAN BROWSING YOUR PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Logic: You Touch Everything
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Jul 16, 2017
WOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAHHHHH. You have an incredible mind! I've never heard somebody talk so in depth about a random thought that they had in their head! You have definatley been doing some ... -
Re: Color Blind (Roses)
Hi! I'm Arianna and I am here with a speed review! I tend to really love slam poetry. Possibly better than regular poetry. Why? Because it's different, and I am ...
Jul 8, 2017 -
Re: A Dog's Point of View
This almost made me cry! I have an extremely soft spots for animals of any kind, so, this gave me mad feels. Thank you so much for this! You have ...
Jul 6, 2017 -
Re: your skin gets thinner the longer it's there
I loved this! When you got to the second stanza I was a little confused but realized that it was an experience with growing older! Relationships are truly important in ...
Jul 5, 2017
