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AriannaC

AriannaC/Minchpunk

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: 1.2.3

    Hello Pattyperfection! Happy Review Day! My name is Ari and I will be reviewing your lyrics today. This is actually very good for your first piece on here. I like ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: hint one

    Hi! I'm Ari and I am going to review your poem! This poem has a simple meaning but is very intricately written. Some people might say that is very unnecessary, ...

    Apr 26, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: roses and shores

    Hi! I'm Ari and I shall review your poem today. I broke the review into 5 sections to make it easier to read. 1.Are you the sea or the shore? ...

    Apr 26, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: bittersweet

    Hi! It's Ari and I'm here to review your work! :D First, let me tell you some qualities that I really loved in here: 1.I don't think you will find ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: dear you

    Wow Kara! Our past lives are so similar! Except, I went through all that WITHOUT any friends! But before I talk about all that, I want to review your work! ...

    Oct 6, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Inner Demons

    Hi! I am Ari, proud daughter and servant of King Christ Jesus! Today, I am going to review your amazing song! I think for the most part, it was pretty ...

    Oct 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Letter INdestructibULL

    Happy Review Day! I have come to do a review of your poem! Mister Frand Frand, you are my favorite writer on here for a reason. This reason is your ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: seasoned skin

    Happy Review Day, Falconer! I'm Ari and I shall be writing you a nice review on this glorious day! Something that I really liked about this is that you used ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Deleted

    Hey! Sorry i'm late for the party! As you know, I have been recently been accused of spam so I am here to actually try to write a review that ...

    Jul 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Headache (parody of "Eyelash")

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    -leh Calls 911- ITS ME AGAIN!!!!! SAND AN AMBULENCE FEEERRRRRRRRSSSSSTTTT!!! MAH FRAND IS DIEIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LEH HEADACHE IS EVIIIILL! IT'S LIKE LEH EYELASHHHHHHH BUT LIKE 99999999999999999

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Limitless Prospect

    AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! I KNEW YOU WHERE PRETTY UNPREDICTABLE BUT I NEVER SUSPECTED SOMETHING LIKE THIS WHILE STALKING -cough- -cough- I MEAN BROWSING YOUR PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Jul 16, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Review, Science Re: Logic: You Touch Everything

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    WOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAHHHHH. You have an incredible mind! I've never heard somebody talk so in depth about a random thought that they had in their head! You have definatley been doing some ...

    Jul 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Color Blind (Roses)

    Hi! I'm Arianna and I am here with a speed review! I tend to really love slam poetry. Possibly better than regular poetry. Why? Because it's different, and I am ...

    Jul 8, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: A Dog's Point of View

    This almost made me cry! I have an extremely soft spots for animals of any kind, so, this gave me mad feels. Thank you so much for this! You have ...

    Jul 6, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: your skin gets thinner the longer it's there

    I loved this! When you got to the second stanza I was a little confused but realized that it was an experience with growing older! Relationships are truly important in ...

    Jul 5, 2017


Isn't it funny how day by day nothing changes but when you look back, everything's different?
— C.S. Lewis