Ardor

Hi there. I was going to do a review of this sooner, but I didn't expect there would only be one review of this piece. So I'll try my best. ...

Hi there. Although today is my birthday, I have kindly taken some time to review this poem for you. The reason I'm doing this? Well, it's so good I have ...

I don't have time for a proper review, but this is really good! Maybe a bit too long, but overall a really impressive piece. Well done :)

Good morning/afternoon! I am 567ajt, and I am here to review this poem for you today. I must say off the bat that I don't know why this doesn't have ...

Well, your layout sure as hell is interesting. It's just so....spacious. It reminds me of your actual poem. It's very euphoric and floating freely. Your words are beautiful and I ...

I find this poem short, but incredibly sweet. As I look across your related items, it seems you have posted A LOT of work. I seem so inferior reading this ...

Hi there. I am 567ajt. I am here for your review ;) Don't worry, I'm not too harsh. I notice this is your first piece, so welcome to YWS. I ...

Good afternoon, interesting-name. I am 567ajt, and I am here to review your poem. I was caught by surprise at your title; it seemed that "she" was very important if ...

Hi there. I am 567ajt. I have arrived to review your poem. I won't go into too much detail into what I thought initially, but that shall be revealed in ...

First off, I really like this piece. Second of all, I love how you don't actually capitalize your words. It adds character to your piece. I love your title, your ...

Good morning. I am 567ajt, here for your review. I came across this piece almost by accident, but I am glad that I found it. It's a great piece, and ...

Well, this is fairly short, but effective. It says what it needs to. I like how a lot of your poems are quite short. I guess it's your trademark. I ...

Hi there. I am 567ajt, here for a review. I have noticed you have been on this site for 9 days, so first and foremost I bid you welcome. Ok, ...

AWWW. This is a really sweet poem. It has nice language and I love your use of call and response between the characters. It shows that while your characters share ...

Hi there! If you didn't know already, I am 567ajt. I mainly review poetry, but occasionally short stories, so this is my safe zone. If you have questions about my ...