Ardor

Hi q! I am here to review your poem. "Screaming won't help me this time, I am locked in between these mirrors. You say you're frightened; I am terrified. You ...

Howdy ho! :D 567ajt here, to review your chapter. As far as first chapters go, this is really good. I like the pacing of it and I also like how ...

Hey Pix :) I have arrived to review this poem, as I need a lot of points XD "Waves crash onto the sandy shore, He takes a breath, The skies ...

"i don’t think i can do this anymore because it is september and july was just a breeze and june was nothing and august was the heat, sweltering and sticky ...

Hi Bobby! :D This is a really good poem, even if a bit...silly and random XD Let's critique it, shall we? "Chocolate is the best thing in the world. It ...

Hi there. 567ajt here, reviewing this poem for you. I have to say, right off the bat, that I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love your title. It's such ...

"I've been caught for Foul murder. For a felony of shame. A tortured soul was buried within, The lake down the street. Maybe thirty blocks away. I've been caught for ...

Hi there. I am 567ajt, here to review your poem. Your username certainly lives up to this poem in particular. "The monsters want your flesh and when they're done with ...

Hi there. 567ajt here. Forgive my naivety. I have never reviewed rap lyrics before, though I have reviewed lyrics/poetry before. So again, sorry if this isn't going to be helpful. ...

Good evening. I am 567ajt here to review your work. So, let's have a look here. Let's take it step by step. "Once upon a time, there were two boys. ...

Hey there :) I liked how you used the reflection in the mirror, and it was generally a really happy piece. I liked how you used the title at the ...

I owe you a review, don't I? ;) Well, it isn't going to be much, as it's been a while since I've reviewed, so I apologize if it isn't very ...

I've been meaning to do this poem for a long time. However, I reserved my review for my 200th, which is now. So be glad :) I am 567ajt, and ...

Ok, this a review. Should this be in the blog section? Not even being mean or anything, but the very first line is "dear bloggers". Also, your spelling and grammar ...

Hi there. I am 567ajt. I am here to do a review of your poem. So, let's take this step by step. "What does the word logic mean? Nothing but ...