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My opinion on your peom? Chocolate;) Although random, and slightly silly I liked it. The third stanza was my favourite, it made me laugh.
~Megan~
Hey there!
My only response is: What about lactose intolerant people, or those allergic to chocolate? xD
~Epic
Simple. They don't have what is needed to live
Hi Bobby!
This is a really good poem, even if a bit...silly and random XD
I like the immediate and unexpected no. It's really fun, and kind of cute too.
Let's critique it, shall we?
"Chocolate is the best thing in the world.
It is one of those things I can't get enough of.
Neither can any of you."
Can't argue with that at all
"We all know this.
Now, why did I post this?
To point out the obvious?
No!"
"No"? Well, you must really love chocolate then
"I did it because chocolate is the truth.
It is the answer.
THE answer.
The question."
So, chocolate is almost like some sort of spiritual deity? O.O
I dig man, I dig.
"Chocolate equals 42.
Chocolate equals immortality.
Chocolate is everything,
It's nothing
It's something."
Chocolate is GOD? Well, I'd be danged.
"This is the truth,
Or is that something I am just saying?
Maybe I am just messing with your heads,
Or maybe my head's messed."
No, no, no. I completely 110% agree with you Bobby. I absolutely applaud you for this breakthrough in sociology and human nature.
"Who knows?
I know!
Do you wanna know?
The answer is:
Chocolate!"
Chocolate! What was the question? Chocolate? XD