Dear bloggers,
hiding a relationship with someone truley blows!
I never understood why parents were so protecting.
I know sure because they "know" what they're thinking.
I love someone I mean I know I am only fourteen and can't define the word "love"
But really who can? Can anyone actually define it? I believe I love him at least I hope it's love.
We didn't tell anyone we were dating. Somehow his sister found out. NOW she uses it against us to get whatever and I mean WHATEVER she wants. See you might be thinking "well why don't you just let everyone know" well I swear if my parents knew I was in a relationship I wouldn't see the light of day for a LONG, long time. I mean it. Now his freaking sister says she hates me. I don't know why i'm alittle different shes a cheerleader kind-of girl and i'm a tomboy. She says she hates everything about me. I know I shouldn't let it bother me but it does I mean who likes hearing that someone hates them? I hate this I really do I wish I were alwoad to date him so I could just say aloud "I love you" or "I have an amazing boyfriend" I love him so!
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Ok, this a review.
Should this be in the blog section? Not even being mean or anything, but the very first line is "dear bloggers". Also, your spelling and grammar is very haphazard at times and fairly hard to read.
You should also separate your paragraphs because then at least people can read it in one step.
Where are your full stops? Your commas? Anything? It just seems like one huge, nonsensical, incoherent monologue.
Please, tell me, what's going on. Is it a failing relationship? One in danger? One that has potential to spark danger?
I am so confused. I'm sorry, but I can't read it.