Ardor

I rolled my eyes at your description. Whenever anyone labels their own work as "cringe" or "semi-cringe", I know it's going to be pretty great, and the thing that frustrates ...

Much like some other works I've seen, and indeed ones I wrote when I was younger, this does run the risk of navel gazing to an indulgent degree. However, there ...

Honestly, I wish I liked it more than I do. There is a lot of potential here, and aside from the typo "bleeker" (should be bleaker), I don't think anything ...

My initial concern was that this would be style over substance. After all, a lot of work has clearly gone into the format for this piece. However, upon reading the ...

This is touching and reminiscent of some of my own, earlier song lyrics. I'd be very interested to know if you have an instrumental for this, and if so if ...

An undercurrent of abuse that is only implied yet seems much more effective, than merely writing a poem called "I get hit a lot by my partner". It's deeply troubling, ...

An interesting way of discussing what is, in my opinion, a somewhat overused topic for poetry. I liked the lowercase throughout, even with the punctuation marks. It adds a sense ...

A palpable self-hatred and self-flagellation, that is somewhat admirable in its uncompromising tone. Whilst there are moments where it harks back to a juvenile sense of armageddon, the end times ...

There is a lot of melodrama here, which is understandable given the rawness of a break up. I think it's definitely going for an incredibly scorned, and hateful tone, evidenced ...

Heya :) MasterGrieves here, and I hath arrived to review thou art's work. I can only hope that this is the opening chapter of a project, because it seems like ...

Hmm. Well, first of all, I am no stranger in writing works of this style. Admittedly, I have had a history of offensive and irreverent works, attacking religion for example. ...

Heggo there :) This is MasterGrieves, and poetry is my forte (although novel writing is becoming a habit of mine :P). I have thus come across your poem on my ...

One way to sum up this work: :( Very very sad baby. It is really upsetting. I hope this person has a helping hand. The whole work is very down, ...

Well, this work reminds me somewhat of Lolita, the book I am reading at the moment. Maybe it's the name Roo, but I also find this work to be quite ...