Apehdavid2

Good job, reaching out might be most times stressful, people tend to judge and misjudge you and they are mostly wrong incorrect. I liked the part you said if I ...

This is very profound and emotionally drenching. You honestly did a good job with this piece. I see the first stanza as you talking about your pains in representative of ...

Honestly I do feel the same way, love is just an unwanted package that comes with overwhelming new feelings. It eventually leaves on vulnerable, after oversharing you eventually end up ...

You did a good job with the way you potrayed your idea of the city , posh, claustrophobic and a fancy concrete jail. I also liked the way you found ...

Honestly, if we could all do this our world would possibly have a chance at being better "I want to shut my ears, I don't want to hear it anymore, ...

Starting you in totality describe you two friendship. You described her as a perfect friend. But somewhere down the line you where contemplating the part you said " I claimed ...

The way you started this poem immediately got my attention. The part you said "ironic equal that's darker" I loved it. Going further the way you also used butterfly as ...

I really enjoyed how you used walls the imagery in my head is brought out I don't have a whole lot of feedback, but one of my favorite sections was ...

You captured a lot of the conflicting emotions maybe between you and the person I don't have a whole lot of specific feedback, but one of my favorite sections was ...

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ai really liked your poem! I think it is very profound and emotional; I definitely feel a way when I read this anytime One thing I really enjoyed about this ...

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ai really liked your poem! I think it is very profound and emotional; I definitely feel a way when I read this anytime One thing I really enjoyed about this ...

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I really liked your poem! I think it's sophisticated though which is partially a good thing One thing I really enjoyed about this poem was how you used line breaks ...

Points: 12 Reviews: 7 DonateSun Nov 07, 2021 8:46 am Apehdavid2 wrote a review... I really liked your poem! I think (like many of the other reviews said) I'm also ...

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I really liked your poem! I think (like many of the other reviews said) that it was quite relatable; I definitely feel more when I dream One thing I really ...

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Hi Scott with a comment I really liked your poem! I think (like many of the other reviews said) that it was quite relatable; I definitely feel more fragile when ...