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Re: Lullaby
Hello Buranko! First of all, I would like to say I really enjoyed your poem. it is so sadly poetic to have a father who is far away from their ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Friendship's Rose
Hello, Annie here to leave you with a short review! First of all, I really enjoy this poem. To see relationships with people as something that is delicate like a ...
Oct 16, 2019 -
Re: Things I Want to Tell You, Part One
Wow! First of all, this was such a powerful piece. i could feel the speaker's emotions as they talked about wanting to be with the person they are speaking of. ...
Oct 7, 2019 -
Re: Breaking heart
Hello, Anniepoo here to leave you a review on this amazing poem. First of all, there seem to be some typos. One example of this is how "don't" in your ...
Aug 23, 2019 -
Re: Happy Memorial Day: A Remembrance Poem
Hello Anne here for a quick review! First of all, I really enjoyed the message of this poem, on such a fitting day too. Happy Memorial Day! I noticed a ...
May 28, 2019 -
Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter Two
Hello, sorry about the random blank comment that I left, my computer seems to be a bit off today.Butttttt, anyhow, I am here to review your SECOND CHAPTER. Woo hoo, ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter One
Wow. This was such a great way to start a book. I was very intrigued from the very start. I only have a few suggestions. First of all, the french ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: The Captain
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this work Cathe. I will have to look into reading more of your writing. I really enjoyed the beginning of your poem, how serious it ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: What
Hello 4revgreen, Anne here for a review. First of all, I really enjoyed your poem, it was such a joy to read. I really like how you used what at ...
Apr 5, 2019 -
Re: carpentry, trivial i know
Hello, Anne here for a review! First of all, I thought that your outlook and general message of this poem was very intriguing. From the very beginning, I couldn't wait ...
Dec 19, 2018 -
Re: Magic
Hello, Anne here to leave a review! I really enjoyed the simplistic manner in which this poem was written. There are a few things that I suggest changing though. Your ...
Dec 19, 2018 -
Re: Father
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was very insightful without being too overly aggressive. The only thing that I would change is your last stanza. It does not seem ...
Dec 19, 2018 -
Re: Never Forget
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem. And how approperate to post it... I appreciated the simplistic style that you used. Everyone was shocked......I do have a few suggestions for ...
Dec 7, 2018 -
Re: After All These Years
Hello, Anne here to leave a review on this wonderful review day! First of all, I felt as if your poem was easy for a reader to connect to and ...
Oct 1, 2018 -
Re: Hello, Darling!
Hello, Anne here for a review. I just read one of your more recent poems and it inspired me to dig through your thread a bit. So, here I am ...
Oct 1, 2018
