AngerManagement

“Don’t move! Just, don’t move” Gavin’s eyes filled with water , as a lonely tear drop ran down his freckled face. I did as I was told, and didn’t leave ...

Hey Ofir, *waves* I held on to my pillow with everything I had. Everything you had? What? Rephrase. Perhaps you mean 'I held onto my pillow in desperation' It felt ...

My angel calls- Announces her being, Imposes her will, Levels me down I like this, especially for the first stanza, I thought it was great. The line 'Announces her being,' ...

In life pain is the promise of tomorrow But it is today that oneself can prepare One will suffer the lesser of the sorrow It shall be the one that ...

“Letters to You” I woke up in the morning I dont like this, It makes the poem a bit awkward. Perhaps if you said, 'I woke up this morning' or ...

Memories are sneaking up on me, Of a time when I was young, And in love, Of I a time when I was whole. After a comma the next letter ...

This poem was one that I could really relate to and so it made it mean a whole lot more to me. It was really well-written, and you didn't use ...

I feel as if you watch over me, but I know you can't talk back, so here I am trying, to be here for you. I like this first stanza, ...

Hey Emaly :D The earth splits, and terror strikes. Screams echo through, A once silent night. The pits of hell, Emerge and fright. Emerge and fright? That makes no sense ...

I really enjoyed reading this, for someone who doesn't really write poetry this is great. They creep up closer, as they try to harm me. But I shut my eyes, ...

Young as we are, older we journey so far Cuddling like a teddy bear, sooner we fear to stare What is going on here? This makes no sense. Brittle like ...

Hey Ish, Tonight was the night that ever every Fatua in the kingdom met, sang out for all of Lasverna to hear. Only spelling mistake I could find, I couldn't ...

"Summer” Summer is coming, the sun is shining The weather is hot, we better go swimming Sexy girls at the beach, we better take a glance Or will regret it, ...

Hey Pshh It started in the basement. Kids are always afraid of the basement. I loved my basement when I was a kid. But then again, I was a weird ...

Hey Retro Alice was about 5 foot 7 and had long ginger hair. She had cold gray eyes and faint red lips. She always wore the faintest blue eye shadow. ...