Summer

Virsanity wrote:

“Summer”
Summer is coming, the sun is shining
The weather is hot, we better go swimming
Sexy girls at the beach, we better take a glance
Or will regret it, it’s only a matter of chance

My head is aching, a good massage might be relaxing
My toes feel numb, a water is refreshing[color=#FF0000] delete the a it would sound better if you didnt have the a
My body shivers a lot, summer makes me sore
Ahhh, what a wonderful day, I can’t help no more

A plentiful of food, healthy and sumptuous
The scent of a sampaguita, pungent and vicious
It is a time of enjoyment, thou shall not miss
For a year of nonstop errand, we must experience a simple bliss again i think it sounds better without a

Leisure and excitement, is coming our way
Prepare for summer, it might be happening next day
Chill and play, you should come and stay
For the most enjoyable event, it’s time to play!
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-ps, It's my 2nd poem so far, i'm not a pro just a beginner