Angel17

Definitely continue this! The end was so unexpected which is what I love about it. The scene setting and charatcers are so vivid and described so imaginitively especially whe you ...

wow, a very powerful and insightful piece. great poem

The way you've expressed such vivid emotions means so many can relate to this piece. I love the raw honesty of the feelings described. Amazing poem

such a beautifully written and touching poem :-)

The poem flowed beautifully and the emotions were conveyed really effectively. Great Poem :-)

A beautiful poem. There is such depth and vivid imagery. The poem doesn't flow as well at some points but all in all i really love it.

A nice poem. The rhyming wasn't forced and i really liked this, very effective on the reader

I like the rhythm in the poem. The imagery was nice but the ending seemed some what incomplete.

The poem looks simple, but your use of imagery creates a meaningful poem. Good job!

The poem was a strong piece which gripped me into reading straight away

I liked the detailed descriptions and the images of colour the poem had. it keeps the reader gripped also by the sounds described. Good piece of a writing.

Beautiful imagery which were strong for the reader to visualise. This was really well written. Good Job!

Thank you for all the comments and advice. More comments welcome.

A lot of people can relate to this who are heading towards important exams. You conveyed some of the feelings well in this.

Great poetic devices used, like similies and metaphors which helped craete stunning visual imagery. Lovely poem, wonderfully written.