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Re: Tomorrow - Prologue
Why wasnt she killed too? Didnt the killers find her? Is this an Open ending kind of thing you left for us to ponder on? Only a few of the ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Can You Hear Me?
This is actually really good :). Hi my name is Samantha and Happy Review day :) I think that this speaks out to me and prehaps other readers because we ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: yesterday.
Is this about a crush? Was my first question but as I read into this more and more it's more than just about Love. It seems to me to be ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Broken
This was so perfectly scripted. It's really amazing. I pictured this in my mind. Just a quick question. Is this a outlook on your life? Is this how you feel ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Why?
Hi :) Welcome to YWS My Name is Samantha. Im here to review :D Even though it's short and full of questions it's still speaking. many people died that day ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: I can't explain
What? Im confused. What is going on? Is there paranormal activity around here? This is so confusing. To write like a diary you need to seperate the dates or it's ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: ... And Life Faded
This must be one of the most meaningful poems I have seen. It's definately one of the best. How do you come up with the idea for this? Please write ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The shortest halloween poem ever
There really wasnt anything to this poem besides 3 words? What was the creativity in this? What was your reasoning to put 3 simple words here that we all say ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Rogue Ch.3
So the Mechanical Dragon was it there to scare her? That's what ran through my mind. I may have skipped a part here so i'll look through and see if ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Tale of a Charmander (A Pokemon Story) Chapter 2; Blast Castle
I think that they should trust Charmander.....then again I always liked Charmander. Thats just my opinion. My best friend is curious on this because she's never actually heard of a ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Tomorrow- Chapter Seventeen
In the beginning when this was said “Yeah, well I’m slightly better fed now, you see. Did I mention that it’s terribly good to see you, Brad.” I say, “What’s ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Doctor Who Fanfic - Chapter 1
Wait im confused. Is this talking about The show like episodes that the show did? That's what confused me the most. Amy is the one who wanders alot so she's ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Always
I'm not trying to be mean. It's a great story and all there is just a few things that caught my eye and I cant really stop seeing them. 1. ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
This makes me curious as to what happened before. What did the voice say exactly? There are so many unanswered questions to this short little excerpt. I hope you get ...
Oct 22, 2014 -
Re: Misused and Abused (1)
I like the plotline you have for the story. It's a bit confusing when you switch the scenes because one moments im with Harry and the next im with Ginny ...
Oct 22, 2014
